Like a huge Venn diagram
Stuck in eternal déjà vu
Of people wishes things and situations
Of love loss wants and emotions
Like a crazy joy ride
Or like a never-ending Sunday afternoon
Like a vast arid desert
Or like a lake shore on a clear day
Dying embers of a fire long gone
Or new beginnings waiting to see the light of day
PS: Creative - On a boring day at work.
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The thoughts are there.. the desire to express those too is there.. there is something which could be..mmm.. feel u can make this still better..
really nice...i love the sunday afternoon bit best. would love to see more of this, like sathish...
good one resh!
there was a mildly successful attempt on my part to sing the poem to the tune of annie's song :P
hey thanks everyone.
i donno who sathish is - but thanks for the feedbak - i have edited it a lil since ur comment.
glad to see u stop by fuego :)
ssm :)
it was a one line idea - only the first one actually - tried a few more math anologies - nothing worked - so took the other route and ended up with this - so i can see why it doesn't jell.
thanks doh :D - u will have to sing it for us sometime - i tried and failed miserably :P
"never-ending- Sunday afternoon.." Well, I wouldn't agree on that bcos they seem to vanish sooooooo fast !!!
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