i shall never forget the day we met
fireworks lit the sky
yes i remember the day we met
wasn’t it the fourth of July?
time flew as we explored
and umpteen evenings we spent together
let me tell you my heart’s desire
i want to fetch the moon for you
the emotions were there
but a little confused
the time we spent
was not, with love infused
let us try this novel scheme
you be my best friend
and i shall try to be yours
yes it is novel indeed
cos i have been your friend
but you are yet to be mine
but we must be!
i miss you when you aren’t around
i even make up reasons to come see you
but i might never have guessed
from the way you behave
how would i know the truth
when being a mystery, so much you love
but can you do one thing for me
wait for me while i make up my mind
think of me more than anyone around
how dare you dangle a carrot in my face
of all the confused people i know
you take the cake
maybe nothing else will work out
and before you know i will be back
then we can continue our little jaunt
hold hands and sing Faust
if i cannot be your choice
i won't either be a backup
i hope you will understand
when i wish you "goodbye and goodluck”
PS: Creative
12 comments:
Very interesting piece resh.. modern poetry, eh? I like the two way conversation in the poem.
>>of all the confused people i know
you take the cake
LOL!!
thanks funny :)
its a story i hear often - so thot of penning it down.
Mmmm - Carrot Cake!
Wait - what were you talking about?
Kidding - nice poem!
this was so cute! and i liked the dialog concept - very innovative!
ano
very nice resh... interesting play of dialogue...
lol @ ashu...
write more resh.. lots more...
cheers, ime
ashu! pls make that black forest :P
thanks ano - happened quite by accident. i had written in 2 sections and was scrolling up and down the page to figure out if it was making sense as a dialouge - so put them next to each other for my own comfort :D
thanks ime - hope so :)
thanks ssm :)
Sahi hei Reshmi ji, ekdum hatke eishtyle hei aapka...
More power to such guys/gals who have the courage to say "Goodbye & Goodluck" to their commitment-phobic mates.. It really sucks to be perpetually stuck in a limbo !!
IW
thanks pari! :P i mean IW :)
yea... making up their minds seems to be a common affliction these days. but its gr8 if at least one of them has the good sense to do the right thing!! :)
good one...u can think of publishing this kind of stuff :)
nie one there resh!
thanks bleu :)
hey anon,
thanks! but this is amateur stuff in my opinion. for personal fun wonly. but love the comments anyways :)
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